tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5952389035146114031.post6259916685308106107..comments2015-08-06T04:27:38.468-07:00Comments on The Amateur Poet: Then and NowJackiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15033596940421659154noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5952389035146114031.post-9271661169441461662013-05-12T17:52:19.233-07:002013-05-12T17:52:19.233-07:00Wow, thats fantastic. I really love the longer lin...Wow, thats fantastic. I really love the longer lines. Your words....I cant explain, but the way they are put together are lovely. I hope one day to write like you!Jo Donaldsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14850388679744449622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5952389035146114031.post-83067943445686873022009-01-15T20:05:00.000-08:002009-01-15T20:05:00.000-08:00awwww jackie....i am sooo flattered and so happy.....awwww jackie....i am sooo flattered and so happy....thank you....jyotsanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348544707786355970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5952389035146114031.post-39555755083756431192009-01-14T17:45:00.000-08:002009-01-14T17:45:00.000-08:00Jyotsana,Aap bohot hobsurut hain. You are very pr...Jyotsana,<BR/><BR/>Aap bohot hobsurut hain. You are very pretty! I am so glad you showed me your pic - now I don't feel so far far away. Thanks!<BR/><BR/>JackieJackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15033596940421659154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5952389035146114031.post-63747378555293197332009-01-13T08:30:00.000-08:002009-01-13T08:30:00.000-08:00hi...u have a dedication from someone, waiting for...hi...u have a dedication from someone, waiting for u at my blog--"nostalgic moments"..so do come over and check it out :)<BR/><BR/>seeya aroundPrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01023126998314268275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5952389035146114031.post-15523028217109390702009-01-11T23:13:00.000-08:002009-01-11T23:13:00.000-08:00see the photo next to the comment....i added my pi...see the photo next to the comment....i added my picture just for u n sayani.<BR/>waiting for the next creation,<BR/>love....jyotsanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348544707786355970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5952389035146114031.post-82701818386005306092009-01-08T21:01:00.000-08:002009-01-08T21:01:00.000-08:00Love it! Are you surprised? I don't know if you ...Love it! Are you surprised? I don't know if you will like the why I loved it... I like the prose feel of this passage, and I really think you could modify this and use it as the first paragraph or two in the starting of a short story, novel, or novella... yes, poetry is very real life, very autobiographical, but so is literature. Think about it, and I want to see your other poem!PrinceofDarknesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02817152237778791887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5952389035146114031.post-73860739023000769162009-01-07T04:27:00.000-08:002009-01-07T04:27:00.000-08:00I have been absent from life again.Like a switch o...I have been absent from life again.<BR/>Like a switch or a plug that forgot to be grounded properly.<BR/>I am volatile: sometimes shocking even the air around me.<BR/><BR/>"Absense from Self is destructive:<BR/>if you're gone too long, it's difficult to find your way back...<BR/>and you become used to the Other - the chaotic abyss.<BR/><BR/>Yet I am back. I managed to pull myself from yesterday,<BR/>and into this moment - Now.<BR/>I remember why I left, and shall forget to do so again."<BR/><BR/>oh my god! I had come to say something to u after reading what u said there on my blog....and now after reading the above lines....i've forgotten what i was saying.....these lines are exactly its been entering that hell and getting out of it.<BR/>truly beautiful....probably somebody meditating will understand the true depth of the poem.<BR/>i'm gonna save it and keep it with me.jyotsanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11348544707786355970noreply@blogger.com