This blog was created for anyone who enjoys reading. I write poetry and short fiction and enjoy getting feedback. I am constantly trying to improve - thanks for reading! -Jackie
Thursday, December 18, 2008
Finish it
Flip me inside out and tear the skin off.
Let me bake the shards of glass in hell.
Jump start a fire under my steel heart.
I have forgotten what it feels like to hurt.
Oh wait - you gently reminded me today, when you stumbled into Cirrhosis.
4 comments:
Anonymous
said...
dear jackie, wishing you an enormously happy 2009. reading your poems make me feel that this too is journey tho of a strange kind that we embark upon. I seem to have graduated these six seven months on the topic of miseries, loneliness and the karmas that we chose. anyways.....with all the love tho I hve never seen you but i know you thru your words.
4 comments:
dear jackie,
wishing you an enormously happy 2009.
reading your poems make me feel that this too is journey tho of a strange kind that we embark upon. I seem to have graduated these six seven months on the topic of miseries, loneliness and the karmas that we chose.
anyways.....with all the love tho I hve never seen you but i know you thru your words.
now this is making me laugh....see what i hve done....this is no anonymous above ....this is me dear pressing the wrong keys.
I love this, it is thoughtful and I can relate to the emotion. thank you
I can feel the incredible emotion whilst reading your work. Very real and powerful!
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